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okay... I'll stop posting the same pic >< but i dunno if it looks better with the lightning or w/o, I tihnk it makes it look really cheezy X(

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:iconkyoaria:
I'm sure that the lightning must have taken a gratuitous amount of effort, but I am compelled to say that this version is far superior, in my mind, to the other two. The detail is stunning and the clouds look very realistic (if not stylized a tad,) but I would ask the artist (if he/she hasn't commented already) on which is his/her favorite. So, as stated, this one is the one that I enjoy the most, so it will be the one which will be :+fav:'d.

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:iconblackpassion777:
Thank you! I like this one better too, but she didn't mention which one she liked better, I'll be sure to ask.


The lightning was just way too cheap, if I do say so myself <3

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"No! Cause I'm evil!"

"You're a bigger fool than I thought."
"Oh yeah! Well you're...naked!"

"That's a giant dinosaur!"
"And I thought Master Bruce was the detective."
:iconphoenixcreation:
i do agree. i like this one better. the lightning just seems unnecessary. or maybe it's just the bolt that's in the front. your attention is drawn to that one more than anything else. if your focus is the dragon and you want some lightning, you need to move the one in the front more to the back and make it smaller. kind of like your other one. you'll really have to play around with placement and angle and such.

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:iconphoenixcreation:
take my demon horse for example. [link] which there is a before and after so you can see the difference.
i really had to play around with the placement until i got something that just felt right.

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:iconblackpassion777:
yeah, but it would also be easier to just take it out entirely X3 thanks for the advice :heart:

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"Did you wash your hands?"
"No! Cause I'm evil!"

"You're a bigger fool than I thought."
"Oh yeah! Well you're...naked!"

"That's a giant dinosaur!"
"And I thought Master Bruce was the detective."
:iconphoenixcreation:
i know. you're welcome. :aww:

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:iconsuperdemon-inuyasha:
great job on this 8D

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~I’m part of the 50% of DA’s Anime fanbase who isn’t a yaoi fan 8D
:iconnikydog142007:
awesome!:D

reminds me of cynder :3
:iconblackpassion777:
Whos Cynder?

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"Did you wash your hands?"
"No! Cause I'm evil!"

"You're a bigger fool than I thought."
"Oh yeah! Well you're...naked!"

"That's a giant dinosaur!"
"And I thought Master Bruce was the detective."

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