It certainly is interesting, but it feels as though any message sent by the piece is lost as the viewer looks for a deeper meaning and fines only cyphers. The colors are beautiful and the rendering suits the overall feel nicely, but I cannot escape the feeling that the design in the lower right corner should be pushed a little further, or left out entirely. The flower petals are easily distinguishable, and the cartoon influenced grinning maw compliments the piece well. I can't exactly tell if he is holding something or not, and if he is...what it is. A solid work, with strong, complimenting tones and textures, creating a sophisticated work. (sorry for the novel, but sometimes when critiquing is encouraged I simply can't restrain my self.) :3

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The cake is a lie

that's a good thing! I love criticism! Yeah, the design in the lower right is just random boredom crap that I started playing with once I realized that I wanted to doodle around XD but I'm capable of killing it <3 as for the left, I dunno what he's holding either O__O maybe it's a stick .....that.. i think...was laziness XD i think I'll go and delete it entirely. <3 thanks for the heads up and thanks for taking the time to write something of value <3 that was really nice!

As for the message, I'm not sure about this guy yet, so his personality and tone probably clash. I know there's something wrong with it, but I can't seem to figure it out >< I though him up at the airport, so maybe that's why he looks like a character on crack XD thanks again though, I appreciate it! Blah, I went and wrote a bunch too...

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"Did you wash your hands?"
"No! Cause I'm evil!"

"You're a bigger fool than I thought."
"Oh yeah! Well you're...naked!"

"That's a giant dinosaur!"
"And I thought Master Bruce was the detective."

ah ha.. problem solved... maybe..

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"Did you wash your hands?"
"No! Cause I'm evil!"

"You're a bigger fool than I thought."
"Oh yeah! Well you're...naked!"

"That's a giant dinosaur!"
"And I thought Master Bruce was the detective."

hehe I like the mask XD it looks great! nice job! 8D

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~Inuyasha is all fine and all mine! 8D
~"We're not retreating, we're advancing in a different direction!"
~I HATE Non-canon Yaoi/yuri (See my stamps about this!)
~I’m part of the 50% of DA’s Anime fanbase who isn’t a yaoi fan 8D